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02Apr

Writing Your College Essays

April 2, 2021 globalgood Uncategorized 66

The college essay. A project whose mythology is much bigger than the actual project itself, one that is on the minds of students years before they actually apply to college. It’s also a hotly-contested topic, with many differing approaches suggested by experts and students. 

Luckily, we’re here to help demystify the process. 

While every student is unique, and every college admissions committee is different, we can offer some tried-and-true guidelines to help you nail your essay—from choosing the topic to the execution. 

It’s about the why, not the what

  • Many students seem to think they have to have saved someone from a burning building or cured a disease or done 5,000 hours of community service in order to write a good essay. They may think they haven’t done anything “interesting” enough. But here’s the secret: whatever you’ve done so far in your life, it’s worth writing (and reading) about. The truth is, admissions personnel want to see what you can MAKE of your experiences, what perspective you have, and how your life so far has prepared you for the future. You’re 18 — they won’t blame you if you haven’t done much yet! Show that you are mature and ready to take on the world. That matters more than you summing up your medical mission trip abroad or reading off your list of extracurriculars.

Avoid controversial topics

  • We know that many students may have encountered and overcome incredible obstacles in their lives, such as trauma or mental illness. However, we recommend that you err on the side of caution when it comes to these topics. This is not to say a great essay couldn’t be written about any of them; however, you never know who is on the other end of this essay. Colleges want to mitigate risks wherever possible, and you do not want to take the chance that your essay reader(s) worry you will not be able to withstand the pressures of college. We know it sounds harsh, but you’re better off safe than sorry. Another item to tread lightly is religion. If you want to write about your faith as an important part of your life, be sure to explain how it has shaped your character and how it will make you an ideal student on their campus.

Show, don’t tell

  • Use active verbs, sensory imagery, and examples wherever possible. Hook them with a story at the outset of the essay. Make it fun for them to read!

Practice the art of the humble brag

  • Instead of stating you are kind, can you describe a time when you helped your younger sister with her homework? Instead of saying you are dedicated, can you describe a late night spent finishing your term paper or perfecting the layout of the yearbook? This goes with “show, don’t tell.” You don’t need to declare your best qualities; you can show them more subtly.

Tailor it for each college

  • While it’s a great idea to have a few generic essays (which is to say, ones that are complete but that could be adopted for different prompts or colleges), you also want to ensure that whoever is reading your essay knows it was written specifically with them in mind. Find a way to work your school’s core values or mission statement, or something unique about their culture. Even if it’s only inserting the name of the university, a little personalization goes a long way. (Side note: take extra care to triple-check you are sending the right essay to the right school!)

Don’t write about the “big game” 

  • We can say from experience that admissions committees read TONS of essays about this. We know it’s important to you—but you want to stand out. Dig deeper.

Keep your tone authentic

  • This isn’t a formal school essay. It’s a chance for you to breathe life into your application, to tell people who you are outside of your list of activities and your grades. You’re a real person, and you’re writing to a real person. Be conversational and authentic to your true voice.

You’re more than a resume and a list of numbers. When you’re done, your college essay should not just answer the prompt, but showcase you as a three-dimensional person: someone with passion, humility, and ambitious plans for your future. Above all, be true to yourself, and show why you are truly a good fit for that school because of your goals and your character. They know you are not a finished product; you are just getting started. Let your excitement shine through. Happy writing!

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08Feb

Tips and Resources For Scholarship Search

February 8, 2021 globalgood Uncategorized 134

Over the past several decades, tuition costs for four-year colleges and universities have outpaced wage growth and inflation. Beyond classroom learning itself, associated costs like room & board, books/lab materials, transportation, and other fees can make what seems like a reasonable price tag suddenly balloon—and every family has heard horror stories about the student debt crisis. 

For many parents, staying local and receiving in-state tuition is an option to cut costs. However, in the past 20 years, in-state tuition and fees have increased 212%, versus a 165% increase for out-of-state (U.S. News & World Report). Even if you smartly invested in a 529 plan or have been dutifully saving for years, the costs can be overwhelming. 

Most of us want nothing more than for our students to worry only about getting into their dream school. Discussing financial limitations with your student is at best awkward, and at worst, a disappointment that they may not be able to attend the college they want. However, there are plenty of options out there to help offset the costs of four-year public and private universities. Below, we break down some ideas to consider, and where to start. 

Take advantage of the resources at your disposal 

Your student’s school college counselor’s job is not just to mail out transcripts. Their office has resources to help start the process of searching and applying for financial aid. Try to set up an appointment, and make sure your student goes into their scheduled meetings planning to ask about financial aid. 

You should also reach out to colleges’ financial aid offices for more information. If you’re still in the application process, factor in financial aid as a search criterion for deciding on a school. (See our previous post for info on how sites like The Princeton Review can provide objective assessments of a school’s financial aid options.) If your student has already been admitted, call the office to set up an appointment with an adviser, or browse their office of financial aid’s site for helpful links. 

Federal aid 

Before each year of college, you can apply for federal grants, work-study scholarships, and loans with the Free Application for Federal Student Aid (FAFSA®) form. Once you complete the form, your college uses that data to assess your aid eligibility—which they’ll share with you via a Student Aid Report. 

The Student Aid Report will explain the aid you’re offered from each college and outline your expected costs. If your student is accepted to more than one school, compare the offers and costs of each and decide which makes the most sense for you. Then, your school’s financial aid office will apply your funds to your tuition and school fees, and any remaining balance will go straight to you for other college costs.

Visit the Federal Student Aid site (studentaid.gov) for more information on FAFSA®. 

Things to keep in mind:

1) You must submit a FAFSA® form every year you are in school.

2) Most federal aid comes with expectations for academic performance, so be sure to pay attention to any GPA requirements in your offers.

3) A significant portion of FAFSA® aid is need-based, not merit-based. If your household makes above certain thresholds for income, you may not be eligible. For that reason, it’s important to seek scholarships and grants from other sources.

4) Keep your eye out for Parent PLUS Loans within FAFSA packages. 

Scholarship search engines 

There are scholarships out there for EVERYTHING. We’ve seen scholarships for left-handed students, those who spell their name a certain way—you name it, there’s probably a scholarship out there for it. Search engines like My Red Kite scrape sites across the internet and aggregate scholarships you can apply for online. You’ll begin by answering some cursory questions to determine what funding your student will be eligible for, and from there, they will serve you recommendations as well as allow you to search. Go to https://myredkite.com/ to sign up for this free service. 

Departmental scholarships 

Many colleges have a special deadline where, if you submit your application prior to the date, you will automatically be considered for merit scholarships—with offers included in your admissions package. If you miss this deadline, you will not be automatically considered, so be sure to call the financial aid office for any Dean’s List, Presidential, or any other general scholarships provided by the university. 

Once you’ve done that, dig a little deeper. Many schools have scholarships broken down by college, department, or major. For example, let’s say your student wants to study creative writing. There is likely to be a scholarship (or several!) specifically for English majors, as well as the individual college in which that department is housed. Beyond the financial aid office, scour the department websites for your student’s intended major and look for opportunities for aid. 

This is not an exhaustive list by any means; there are other options for loans and grants out there, all of which merit a thorough Google search. Every student and every family is different, but we all have the same goals when it comes to making college affordable. Bring your student into the conversation and help them understand their role and responsibility in paying for their education. And remember: no amount is too small! Those $500 to $2,000 scholarships add up if you stay open-minded and committed to finding solutions that work best for your family.

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